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Lyra's Fanfic by Pony-Berserker Lyra's Fanfic by Pony-Berserker
In the next part, Lyra draws a comic, submits it, doesn't get a response, goes insane and ends up in a lunatic asylum, where she spends 15 years until she's released. Then she goes on a killing spree, kills 4 ponies until she is captured. She gets a death penalty. Gets clemency from Princess Celestia, and is put in the Everfree Penitentiary, where she serves life sentence with no parole. Or not.

Who are the people mentioned by Lyra? I dunno, but these people might know. Ask them.
Special thanks to VoidChicken and Alamais for pre-reading!
Inked and colored in ArtRage. Lettered in Inkscape. | MLP and its characters belong to Hasbro | If you repost or translate this comic, please link back here. You can repost it only outside of DeviantArt! | EQD 07 Sep 2013 post | Russian translation <a href="ponyworld.egloos.com/454439>Korean translation</a>
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:iconaaron235:
Aaron235 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2015
That description... O.o
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:iconmcasomm:
MCAsomm Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
Quebec?

FCK YEAH! BEST PROVINCE!
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:icone-guardias:
E-guardias Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
most fanfiction writters.
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:icondragonflyzmc:
dragonflyzMC Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
whats in the "toybox"?
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:iconihamza995:
ihamza995 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
The Mr.Bean picture in the back!
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:iconmlpegasis4898:
MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Pre reader who likes socks" :XD: :XD: :XD:
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:icontwizzler787:
Twizzler787 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love the box in the first panel. "I keep nothing illegal here. Just toys, k?"
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:iconlakword:
Lakword Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see Monalisa after Mr.Bean did work on her on the last panel XD
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:icondragontamer360:
DragonTamer360 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awwww lol
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:iconajksob:
Ajksob Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
What's OOC?
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Google it...
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:iconlakword:
Lakword Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I did and all I found were sexual ones which did not make much sense with this comic
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OOC? OOC is "out-of-character". There is nothing sexual in it, lol.
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:iconlakword:
Lakword Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahhh... Thank you :D

I guess I need to change search provider as this one I have cant seem to find anwsers I need XD
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:iconsasq:
SasQ Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
That's because Google personalizes your search results according to what you search most frequently ;)
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:iconlakword:
Lakword Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Im pretty sure thats the last thing Im searching. If it would be true it would find Skyrim refrences
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:iconggpestilence:
ggpestilence Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Them references !
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:iconkieransderp:
kieransderp Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
can any one see the mr been reference in the last scene??????
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:iconadam7868:
adam7868 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
and i glad you put this up here this goes perfectly with my argument that there are not enough lyra fanfics nd there need to be more and the only good fanfics with lyra at her best is with either bon bon(which im ok with) or octy and vinyl(those two have serious problems)
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:iconquakebrothers:
QuakeBrothers Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
what is OOC?
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
use google...
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:iconmlp-oc-creators-wiki:
MLP-OC-Creators-Wiki Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Minty, how dare you reject Lyra's story!!
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconicwutudidthereplz:
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:iconaqua-andfriends:
Aqua-andfriends Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I love this:

Panel 1
TOYS:
I don't keep anything illegal here
Only toys here, K?

Panel 2
If you can read this, it means nothing

Panel 3
NOthing illegal here:seriously.
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:iconlinkzilla:
Linkzilla Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
...Is that Mr. Bean's Whistler's Mother in the final panel?
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes =)
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:iconbanditbusterj:
BanditBusterJ Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
ah yes, the 'overdone' factor in a fando
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:iconmoonstar-silverclan:
Moonstar-SilverClan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Student General Artist
You know that theres no such "Quebec weekly" rigth? I actually live in Quebec -.-
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
and don't say it's the first time you see a made-up name in a work of fiction. it's a common thing.
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Moonstar-SilverClan Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Student General Artist
I wouldn't say that, a lot of time theres made-up name in fiction, but I was surprised because I rarely see one with the name of my province..
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
1. I came up with a title that wasn't supposed to be real. search through comments for explanations.
2. Reality is unrealistic. There's a French-language Quebec newspaper with a title translating into "Quebec weekly".
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:iconmoonstar-silverclan:
Moonstar-SilverClan Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh okay.....
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:iconfavmir:
favmir Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist
As *TwilightIsMagic said, 

"Red Horse gives you hands."
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:iconshadowthehejhog:
SHADOWtheHEJHOG Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
I remember sending in my first fanfic. At least this guy was nice enough to say WHY he would not take it other then 'perhaps you should consider not being writer and is English you're first language?' which I'll admit looking back was pretty close to being true when it came to writing xD Luckily I have improved a lot over the past year and have even made it to EQD once already.
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:iconportaldash:
PortalDash Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
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:iconzalgoprincesscadance:
ZalgoPrincessCadance Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Pre-reader who likes socks XD
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:iconmittysocks:
MittySocks Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well.
At least the guy was nice.
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:iconsnapcentino:
SnapCentino Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Professional Writer
I like the term "Alicorn Sparkle" to replace "Mary Sue".
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:iconbeaglel4:
beaglel4 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
Is there anything illegal in the safe?
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:iconice2x:
Ice2x Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
i think derpy dropped it
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:iconceraperduta:
ceraperduta Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
Love the Mr. Bean reference.
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:iconvree:
vree Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
...OK, who gave the pre-reader job to a #&@ humie.
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:iconheavenshipperartist:
HeavenShipperArtist Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Clarkson XD
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:iconfrigg-fluff:
Frigg-Fluff Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This here is one of my old DA friends in a nutshell XD
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:iconshamrock95:
Shamrock95 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
You're not a Twilicorn fan, I gather?
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're right
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:iconsoupnazimark2:
SoupNaziMark2 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
Yeah, how many princesses does that locale NEED?  At least crown Celestia Queen...or Co-Queen....or something.
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123cupcake Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
                                                                                                
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:icon123cupcake:
123cupcake Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
love the toybox!!!
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