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March 27, 2013
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I Just Wanted To See Them Smile by Pony-Berserker I Just Wanted To See Them Smile by Pony-Berserker
UPDATE 17/08/2014 - Corrected most apparent mistakes, changed the size of the font, tweaked most panels in more or less visible ways, changed the black 'background' into white.

Korean translation:

Oh man. I can't believe I drew this... I hope I haven't overdone it in the 7th panel
And yes, a toilet again. Because what is a prison without a dirty toilet.

Poor Pinkie. She's gonna have hard time in that place. But ignorance is not an excuse, apparently.

Everything was drawn by me in Ponyscape (a derivative of Inkscape) and Inkscape.

MLP Pinkie Pie and Screw Loose belong to Hasbro.
The Policepony designed by me.
"Art" by me.
You can send it to any site/blog/booru etc, or translate into any language, but please remember to link back here (but you can't post it on DeviantArt!)
I submitted this comic to a contest organized by :icongroup-of-stalkers: and I won this contest!…
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Critique by jms61899 May 3, 2013, 12:34:47 PM
ok well it sounds more like raity but other than that i love it the drawing was great it was funny and it was amusing i do so hope you make more and i shall add you to my watch list i love your work i hope you know the details were great! i just want to know who that crazy pony is and why shes eating in a toilet? I will come to see more and your being added to my watch list thank you and have a great day! see you soon =3 =) oh and O3o can u start makeing tutorials?
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Dell-AD-productions Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Derpy was arrested?
Gammer14 Featured By Owner 6 days ago
That poem on the wall... Dang Trixie has some real demonic thoughts. 
Bronytrainman Featured By Owner 6 days ago
tetrisman64 Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Pumpkin Spice: I'll bust 'ya out!
BejeweledApples Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
What really got me was that poem on the wall. My Inspiration Sense is tingling so much now...
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I remember writing that part, and I totally loved it! ;D
BejeweledApples Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can see why!
TheShadowEmpress Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE the poem in the sixth panel. :D
mime432 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
Real Pinkie or Pinkamena  that cell?
Maks4d Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
Hmmm... This one reminds me Russian movie "Зеленый слоник (Green elephant)".
This scene…
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