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I Just Wanted To See Them Smile by Pony-Berserker I Just Wanted To See Them Smile by Pony-Berserker
UPDATE 17/08/2014 - Corrected most apparent mistakes, changed the size of the font, tweaked most panels in more or less visible ways, changed the black 'background' into white.

Korean translation: ponyworld.egloos.com/400540


Oh man. I can't believe I drew this... I hope I haven't overdone it in the 7th panel
And yes, a toilet again. Because what is a prison without a dirty toilet.

Poor Pinkie. She's gonna have hard time in that place. But ignorance is not an excuse, apparently.

Everything was drawn by me in Ponyscape (a derivative of Inkscape) and Inkscape.

MLP Pinkie Pie and Screw Loose belong to Hasbro.
The Policepony designed by me.
"Art" by me.
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Critique by jms61899 May 3, 2013, 12:34:47 PM
ok well it sounds more like raity but other than that i love it the drawing was great it was funny and it was amusing i do so hope you make more and i shall add you to my watch list i love your work i hope you know the details were great! i just want to know who that crazy pony is and why shes eating in a toilet? I will come to see more and your being added to my watch list thank you and have a great day! see you soon =3 =) oh and O3o can u start makeing tutorials?
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:iconsupersexyghotmew95:
supersexyghotmew95 Featured By Owner May 19, 2015
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww poor pinkie
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:icondowlphin:
Dowlphin Featured By Owner Edited May 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This comic could/should have ended with the fourth panel.
Kinda went downhill from there. ( Sorry for stating the obvious, haha. ^^ )
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:iconinda26:
inda26 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
that quote, its inspired by Rorschach from watchman isint it?
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, it was.
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:iconmastervule:
MasterVule Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Derpy waz here too XDD
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:iconlittle-rolling-bean:
Little-rolling-bean Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Out of character for pinkie, or maybe she realised that she does not wanna be friends with everyone?
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:iconfewufhweufh:
fewufhweufh Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
This might look like a scene from fallout equestria
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:icontyruvelp:
tyruvelp Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
1 -  pinkamina is prettier than pinky 
2- could she not just use her 4th wall abilities or her emergency break out of jail kit that she has stashes in all the pony jails for just in case she ever goes to jail??
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
4th wall breaking happens only when it's funny, and doesn't work when it would be a lame, easy way out, because most writers want to avoid that.
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LauraAnneFTLover Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014
Those writings on the wall.. XD Does Trixie or Derpy hate Celestia? How did Derpy even get in there.... and.. Trixie loookssss awfully crazy o.o
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:iconeqfazrael:
EqFAzrael Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student General Artist
That isn't trixie. It's a crazy sort of pony that thinks he's a dog, from the Episode, "Read it and Weep" (Season 2, Episode 16)
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:iconlauraanneftlover:
LauraAnneFTLover Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
Looks like Trixie and the writing says so.
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:iconeqfazrael:
EqFAzrael Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Student General Artist
th04.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i… here is a pic of the pony from the episode. It's not Trixie.
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:iconlauraanneftlover:
LauraAnneFTLover Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
Oh ok.. but why did she even mention Trixie? o.o
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:icontyruvelp:
tyruvelp Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
maby trixie was in there b4 ?? 
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:iconlauraanneftlover:
LauraAnneFTLover Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
hmm maybe.. XD
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:iconstonehot316:
StoneHot316 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*see's jail number is 34*
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HT(IHGTOIU@HROUH@UEHOh# FUK
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:icondell-ad-productions:
Dell-AD-productions Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Derpy was arrested?
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:iconcrazyhammer:
crazyhammer Featured By Owner Edited Aug 27, 2014
:iconderpyhoovesplz: : Two times
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:icondell-ad-productions:
Dell-AD-productions Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Twice?! For what?!
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:icongammer14:
Gammer14 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
That poem on the wall... Dang Trixie has some real demonic thoughts. 
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:iconbronytrainman:
Bronytrainman Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
EWWWWwww
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:icontetrisman64:
tetrisman64 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
Pumpkin Spice: I'll bust 'ya out!
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:iconbejeweledapples:
BejeweledApples Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
What really got me was that poem on the wall. My Inspiration Sense is tingling so much now...
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I remember writing that part, and I totally loved it! ;D
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:iconbejeweledapples:
BejeweledApples Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can see why!
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:icontheshadowempress:
TheShadowEmpress Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE the poem in the sixth panel. :D
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:iconmime432:
mime432 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
Real Pinkie or Pinkamena  that cell?
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:iconmaks4d:
Maks4d Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
Hmmm... This one reminds me Russian movie "Зеленый слоник (Green elephant)".
This scene www.youtube.com/watch?v=QZ6nLe…
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I haven't watched the scene. I've only heard of it, but you are probably right, if you linked what I think you linked :P.
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:iconpsychopathneb:
psychopathneb Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Artist
parckor was ilegil in my scool wich was purly jumping of stuf
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:iconangieangel3:
AngieAngel3 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Parkour Illegal? :iconsadponyplz: (Also why is that an Pony Creator Icon)
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hm? where do you have a pony creator icon? O.o
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:iconangieangel3:
AngieAngel3 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no no, the icon was made with the pony creator
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well, apparently... but I don't see how it is relevant to the comic :P it seemed quite random.
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DaiGuard78 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
There is a pony called Screw Loose?
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:iconnoble-six-rulez:
Noble-Six-rulez Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
HANG THERE KID! I'm on the way with Celestia.
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:iconsnakemanvsarbok:
SnakeManvsArbok Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Remind Pinkie not to drop the soap, m'kay?
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:iconszabobali:
szabobali Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait..... *MINDBLOWN* WARNING INCOMING LONG TEXT AHEAD!
So if we use an extended universe on MLP, Trixie in the far future survived some kind of epic pony war, and did the same thing, that Twilight did. Rewinded time before the disaster to warn herself/everypony about the disaster. They (in the present) thought, 'time travel is impossible', therefore this pony is insane. So they locked her in a mind facility (if that's how it's called, where they put crazy or insane persons).(Imagine a man running in the strees, and shouting "THE END IS NEAR! APOCALYPSE*insert not to far from actual date* ARMAGEDDON!!, you would think 'this man is insane! Somebody take him to a mind facility)
About her cutie mark,mane, and her eyes. Paint, she painted her flank blue, and painted something different on it, and cmon, if they can timetravel, I suppose they have some magic spells to modify your eye colour, so the other ponies in the far future can't recognises her, clever girl. But you can go blind, if you fooling around with changing your eye colour too often, because it's in your DNA, and you can't fool around with DNA.
Hmm. Effective identification system, splash cutie mark with water, if it melts down, ha! fake identity!
About her mane... Messy, do you think, during an epic pony war, there is time to shower, and brushie brushie your mane? I think not. [just a theory]
Anyway, YOU'RE VERY BORED, YOU READ THIS MADA*BUY SOME APPLES*ING LONG TEXT!
Here's your prize : [insert a dancing filly Trixie on a cake, becauseIdon'tknowhowtoputplzpicturesincomments.]

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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the pony in the comic is Screw Loose, not Trixie. Trixie's text is an unrelated background gag
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szabobali Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, I didn't know that, thanks! :)
But my theory is possible, isn't it?
Screw Loose can be a her fake name?
That could be a perfect incognito: 
Waterproof paint, contact lenses, new name/fake name.
But think about it, if Screw Loose is secretly Trixie from the far future, 
the text has a message!
She wanted to help, but they put her in a mind facility, and when they realise, she isn't insane, she won't help.
(Yes, I know, it's a movie reference)
Okay. I stop now, 23 mindbuck will be enough for me today...
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spottedstar1123 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
34
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:iconbonesatellite:
BoneSatellite Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
Spike can get away with parkour because he's banging half the mares in Ponyville. Pinkie...she should've thought ahead.
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:iconacacia-rabbit-desert:
ho well... shit XD
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:icon1992andbeyond:
1992andbeyond Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
PINKIE PIE: PARKOUR (A Friend Indeed) Disturbing the peace (A Friend Indeed) Destruction of property (A Friend Indeed) Public nuisance

TWILIGHT: Cowardice (Dragon Quest) Stalking (Feeling Pinkie Keen) Child abuse, didn't let Spike know he was about to fall in a lake (Winter Wrap Up)

APPLEJACK: Conspiracy to start a war (Over A Barrel) Racism (Over A Barrel and Bridle Gossip)

RARITY: Cowardice (Dragon Quest) Child Abuse (Sleepless In Ponyville and maybe others)

RAINBOW DASH: Assault (Luna Eclipse) Breaking And Entering (Read It And Weep) Cowardice (Dragon Quest) Animal Cruelty (May The Best Pet Win) Destruction of the Ponyville Dam, nearly destroying the entire town (The Mysterious Mare Do Well)

FLUTTERSHY: Attempt Of Desertion (Dragonshy) Assault (Putting Your Hoof Down)

CMC: Fraud (Ponyville Confidential) Trespassing (Ponyville Confidential)

SPIKE: ANIMAL CRUELTY AND BRIBERY (Just For Sidekicks) Destruction Of Property (Secret Of My Excess) Cowardice (Dragon Quest)
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:iconktig88:
Ktig88 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
How about all of Spike's Counts of Theft?
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:icon1992andbeyond:
1992andbeyond Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
When? You mean when he attacked AJ'S chickens in Owls Well That Ends Well?
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:iconktig88:
Ktig88 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
No in Secret to my Excess Spike stole everything
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