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Crossed Her Line by Pony-Berserker Crossed Her Line by Pony-Berserker
Commissioned by :iconharmonystar-v2: who wanted a comic about Derpy winning a speed skating race, and getting DSQ for using doping in form of muffins. but the ending seemed so sad this way (my mother couldn't get over the sad ending, she felt so bad for "this poor dear" - she isn't anything close to an MLP fan, but still she seemed to care, haha and she told my aunt... and my dad... who agreed with her), so... I came up with more happy ending. Sort of :laughing:
And it's my third picture from the Olympic series (all of them were commissioned by HarmonyStar, but since I'm a winter sports fan (or even maniac) I was totally fine with these themes) =P

Cutie Mark Crusader Curlers! Yay! by Pony-Berserker But Still No Cutie Mark by Pony-Berserker 

Great thanks to VoidChicken for his useful advice.

MLP and its characters belong to Hasbro. | Art - moi  If you repost or translate this comic, please link back here. You can't post it on DeviantArt. | 12 Jan 2014 EQD Post

Btw, speed skating races consists of two players running at the same time... which means that Lyra has finished her race earlier...

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:iconzombiefx:
ZombieFX Featured By Owner May 25, 2015
COMPETE OR DIE!? what the.... is that for kids?!
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:iconw0nderbolts:
W0nderbolts Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015
pay like everyone else rainbow CRASH
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:iconbadgaldinger:
Badgaldinger Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015
Derpy's never going to outlive that line, is she?
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:iconfredcreator97:
Fredcreator97 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
Doot Doot muffins enhanced
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:iconthe-shipping-killer:
The-Shipping-Killer Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015
What was the sad ending?
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think the comic was supposed to end after Panel 2. Which would definitely be more harsh for Derpy :P
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:iconthe-shipping-killer:
The-Shipping-Killer Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015
Yeah that makes sense.
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:iconanadminnamedpaul:
AnAdminNamedPaul Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
sweet little Derpy! Always looking at the brighter side of things! 

(or sides, depending which directions those eyes...oh you get the point..)
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:iconchancetheskywolf:
ChanceTheSkyWolf Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
tom the crab
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:icondragontamer360:
DragonTamer360 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
DERPY!
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:iconcvarc:
cvarc Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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:iconsevenofeleven:
sevenofeleven Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
I have to reduce my muffin intake.

Looks great.
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:icongjds-7:
GJDS-7 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"P-B was here", what does that mean? ...Peanut Butter?:?
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
P(ony)-B(erserker)
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:icongjds-7:
GJDS-7 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oohhh okay...what does that mean?
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
are you serious? Didn't you see my name?
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:icongjds-7:
GJDS-7 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...:o...AH! Ah ha! I fooled you didn't I!? I knew what you were going for in the first place! Teehee lolol!:iconohyoublushplz: 
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"I was just joking" is the most common excuse for doing something stupid =P
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:icongjds-7:
GJDS-7 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know, I was just joking around for giggles.;p
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:iconskpip:
SKpip Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
This is really funny- and your art style is great, too!
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:iconxomegaxx:
XomegaXX Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love your art so much. THe detail, the backgrounds, everything.
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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:iconwarfost:
Warfost Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
The face/reaction of Scootaloo on the first panel are priceless :D
As also I never expected that muffins can replace steroid :p
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:iconbruinsbrony216:
BruinsBrony216 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Freestyle sprint" on the sign in the 2nd panel = Running like the 6 Million Dollar Man crossed with Kermit the Frog ( www.youtube.com/watch?v=6HuqNd… )  
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:iconsfaccountant:
SFaccountant Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
Muffin-based performance enhancers? Man, steroids are getting more advanced every year!
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:iconhoseakm:
HoseAKM Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014
Always looking on the bright side, eh? 

By the way, I love those little things you put in the background.
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:iconsammyp2992:
sammyp2992 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
was i the only one who saw the first panel and immediately thought of this

www.youtube.com/watch?v=6mmrmH…
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:iconmlpmichael:
MLPmichael Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014
omg that was AWESOME! i love this comic so much more now!
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes, I was totally inspired by his story, when I made this panel =P
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:iconquantumbranching:
QuantumBranching Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
What's Lyra doing with her horn in the background? Is she tripping RD? Bad form, Lyra!
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:iconsfaccountant:
SFaccountant Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
I wondered that too. My best guess is she's using it to generate heat? Because it's cold? Dunno.
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
good thinking there.
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:iconkarkovice1:
karkovice1 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014

NOW I wanna see Lyra speed skate on two legs, like the humans do. :)

 

Can you do one about hockey after that? Canada(my home country) has high hopes for gold in both women's and men's hockey again this year. :D

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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
skates... ponies' anatomy isn't meant for skates =P eh, I don't even know how they could hold sticks... with their mouth? =P
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:iconkarkovice1:
karkovice1 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014

Or maybe just show Lyra holding the stick in her hooves.

 

OR have a whole hockey team made up exclusively of unicorns. :D

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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hockey in real life - just for whites*
hockey in Equestria - just for unicorns.

heh, that'd work

*I'm aware of a few black players in NHL history :P
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:iconkarkovice1:
karkovice1 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
And I'm aware of at least a couple NOW. P.K. Subban for the Montreal Canadians, and Wayne Simmonds for the Philadelphia Flyers. :)
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:iconjayswing103:
Jayswing103 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
I can see you like Lyra. Lyra for best pony!
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:iconpineycreek:
PineyCreek Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I see Rarity is still battling Cancer in the background... thank you to anybody who gets that joke.
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
funnily, in Polish, cancer is associated with lobsters, not crabs.
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:iconultimateguardian7777:
UltimateGuardian7777 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014
I think that was referring to the constellation.
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:iconwheeljackson:
WheelJackson Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014   General Artist
Steroid muffins? XD
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Rarity is kicking the crab out of that crap.

... I said it the wrong way round, didn't I?
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:iconnatsu714:
Natsu714 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014
I love Derpy's optimistic outlook on things!! XD
It makes my heart soar.

In other news, I love that shot of her at the finish line. She looks like she glided the whole way there without moving her legs practically, which makes the picture derpy as heck. In other words, freaking adorable.

Nice job. ;D
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:iconstreetsweep237:
streetsweep237 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
looks like there both even.
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:icontigreanpony:
tigreanpony Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014
That was funny.
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:iconajr001:
AJR001 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014
Hey, at least Derpy still thinks positively... :XD:
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:iconzalleus:
Zalleus Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
A nice lesson in humility.
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:iconbb-k:
BB-K Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks like one small error becomes a big problem for poor Dash. :(
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
Derpy would NEVER cheat!
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